I refuse to believe this is your first game. Ain't no way. I was hesitant to drop $5 since I never heard of you but I don't regret my "stupid decision" one bit. It's about as short as I expected for a 'chapter one' but the amount of quality packed into that short length adds way more value to its weight, even if it is light at the moment.
Normally I can be pretty thorough on criticism but in this case, I'd have to go back and actively look for nitpicks to offer any. Very well done.
Thanks a lot! It is my first game, but I've gained experience on RenPy by working with StrongGirls (as mentioned in "Why you should follow Gobbo"). Also I've been working on this for 6 months. I'm glad you like it!
Great, this is a new level of visual novel, so many cool new features. Except I'm not sure about the girl's voice, the voice is like older and doesn't fit the character
I've been told as much with the VA, and if I can, I want to recast Elena. The VA herself did a fantastic job, but she's wasn't the right pick for this role.
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I refuse to believe this is your first game. Ain't no way. I was hesitant to drop $5 since I never heard of you but I don't regret my "stupid decision" one bit. It's about as short as I expected for a 'chapter one' but the amount of quality packed into that short length adds way more value to its weight, even if it is light at the moment.
Normally I can be pretty thorough on criticism but in this case, I'd have to go back and actively look for nitpicks to offer any. Very well done.
Thanks a lot!
It is my first game, but I've gained experience on RenPy by working with StrongGirls (as mentioned in "Why you should follow Gobbo"). Also I've been working on this for 6 months.
I'm glad you like it!
Great, this is a new level of visual novel, so many cool new features. Except I'm not sure about the girl's voice, the voice is like older and doesn't fit the character
I've been told as much with the VA, and if I can, I want to recast Elena. The VA herself did a fantastic job, but she's wasn't the right pick for this role.
i like this next gen FMG game. Really like the animated sprites and UI. Hope to see more from you
will you make it free?
Well, I'm counting on this to make a living, so... that is unlikely. ^^
Gobbo needs to eat too!
Perhaps tag this game with FMG? I usually find new games using the tag system, but lucky found this cause I was following OmniOkami who reviewed it.
Thanks for the suggestion! I applied it immediately! ;)
Great stuff! This is one of a kind in this "genre".
Ma recommandation
Thanks man!
Woop, emergency fix to the Chapter Select system to fix an issue only appearing if you had no saves for the game.
Thank you, fastest fixes on the whole Wild West.
Also, Itch has useful DevLog feature for such messages🤓
Indeed. I've noticed it was there, but I wasn't sure if it was worth making a DevLog for one small fix. ^^